Horror opening - first cut

This is the first copy of my film:

strengths:

• It is within the time limit - 2 mins
• Builds tension
• The colouring changes from dark to black and white

Weaknesses:

• The clips do not flow and so, need to be edited more
• Some audience members did not understand the use of the black and white
• You can hear wind in certain bits
• The little girl looks at the camera
• Institution logo needs 
• The music needs to be added properly
• The video quality of the video is low